08/17/14 7PM-930PM
I completed assignments seven and eight. Assignment seven was an ad lib news actuality, which I had to write. When my mentor critiqued it he thought it was a good read. It was loud and clear. He also liked my work on assignment eight, which was a sports report and reading sports scores. There was on read though that I had to re-record becasue the story was a about a race car driver's death becasue my tone did not match the story. I needed to sound more meaningful and have a slower tone. I corrected this and inserted it ino the assignment.